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Friday 30 November 2007

By The Wave

The beautiful white foam
And the mystic blue depths,
Never fail to enchant,
A single sentient soul.

The mystic blue ocean,
Those unfathomable depths,
Speak of great stories
That have enriched creation.

The rebellious white waves,
Young and ambitious,
Stretch out from the ocean,
To try and make a change.

The ocean beckons you
To learn from experiences.
The waves reach for you
To create new ones...

11 comments:

Neeraj said...

In the beautiful white foam
In the depths unknown
In the secret truce between the ocean and the sailor
And the one that's with a whaler
One thing that that I cherish
Is the precariousness of fight or perish
And girl, your style is expressive
But yes a way romantic
In a broad daylight, and even in the brightest moment of our walking life, lets us celebrate but not romanticize.

And yes, keeping my prejudices apart, to say the least, its really a good one.
keep it up.

Kaushik said...

I liked it. You?

Kaushik

Bakarbaaz said...

Woooohoooooo!!!! Where did that come from? I mean when did this lil short tiny kid begin to think so deep.... Wonderful piece.....

*nods head* Good Stuff!!

Kobi
P.S.Still can't believe where this came from.....the hyperactive jumping jackass!!!

nerdyberdy said...

I love you. Honest.
The ocean, it does beckon to me.
And I do await the experiences the waves have to give me.
Anticipation.
Thanks for putting it down in words.

carapace said...

you are the queen of studs.

Vigi said...

think a small wave just hit me...

Unknown said...

Really enjoyed reading it.Beautiful imagery! ya..the mystic blue ocean still perplexes us with its subterranean secrets.

Anonymous said...

I thought it was very lovely! I loved your choice of words.

Uttara said...

Dear Ardra & ocdbloggergirl,
Thanks a lot, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Purvi said...

OMG!very Indian in feel and soul to me! Simply loved it Uttara!

Uttara said...

Dear Purvi,
Thanks a lot =)