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Saturday, 14 November 2009

Rest in Peace

They mocked
They ignored
They cheated
They shunned,

You,
For being who
You were.

You,
Cut your ears,
Filled your pocket
With memories
To dissolve,
Between the Acts,
Shooting your head
In a field
Of opinions,
And breathed
A room full
Of deception.

Perhaps,
You took
Their world
Too seriously.

13 comments:

vales said...

Perhaps you did. I like the poem but who's got you all wound up? I will paste them.

Uttara said...

Haha, danke danke.

nerdyberdy said...

"This world was never meant for one as beautiful as you."
That song makes me want to cry.

Uttara said...

Those particular lines make me want to cry.

SHIVRAJ 'arbit' said...

munks .....i don't know what to say

Uttara said...

@Arbit,
Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

Kommu said...

With him it is in general a bad thing.

Uttara said...

Er. OK.

The Write Girl said...

This is deep, moving, and certainly evokes a feeling of being lonely. Nicely written.

Reflections said...

Such a deep piece on a sad subject..

I very much liked this, nicely done.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Poignant words...I could feel the sadness deeply.

Sandra.if said...

strong feelings here!

Uttara said...

@ Sandra.If,
It was inspired by the song 'Vincent' by Don McLean.