The beautiful white foam
And the mystic blue depths,
Never fail to enchant,
A single sentient soul.
The mystic blue ocean,
Those unfathomable depths,
Speak of great stories
That have enriched creation.
The rebellious white waves,
Young and ambitious,
Stretch out from the ocean,
To try and make a change.
The ocean beckons you
To learn from experiences.
The waves reach for you
To create new ones...
In the beautiful white foam
ReplyDeleteIn the depths unknown
In the secret truce between the ocean and the sailor
And the one that's with a whaler
One thing that that I cherish
Is the precariousness of fight or perish
And girl, your style is expressive
But yes a way romantic
In a broad daylight, and even in the brightest moment of our walking life, lets us celebrate but not romanticize.
And yes, keeping my prejudices apart, to say the least, its really a good one.
keep it up.
I liked it. You?
ReplyDeleteKaushik
Woooohoooooo!!!! Where did that come from? I mean when did this lil short tiny kid begin to think so deep.... Wonderful piece.....
ReplyDelete*nods head* Good Stuff!!
Kobi
P.S.Still can't believe where this came from.....the hyperactive jumping jackass!!!
I love you. Honest.
ReplyDeleteThe ocean, it does beckon to me.
And I do await the experiences the waves have to give me.
Anticipation.
Thanks for putting it down in words.
you are the queen of studs.
ReplyDeletethink a small wave just hit me...
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed reading it.Beautiful imagery! ya..the mystic blue ocean still perplexes us with its subterranean secrets.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was very lovely! I loved your choice of words.
ReplyDeleteDear Ardra & ocdbloggergirl,
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, I am glad you enjoyed it.
OMG!very Indian in feel and soul to me! Simply loved it Uttara!
ReplyDeleteDear Purvi,
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot =)