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Friday, 14 November 2008

Don't...

Don't worry about the lies told
They were said by the lawyers.
Don’t worry about the laws
They were made by the revolutionaries.
Don’t worry about the money
It was stolen by the thieves.
Don’t worry about the promises
They were made by the politicians.
Don’t worry about the system
It was made by the defective.
Don’t worry about the consequences
They were made by the unimportant.
Don’t worry about the protocols
They were made by the impotent.
Don’t worry about respect
It was made by the egotists.
Don’t worry about discipline
It was made by the unruly.
Don’t worry about deadlines
They were created by the tardy.
Don’t worry about commitments
They are made by the forgetful.
Don’t worry about the principles
They were made by the immoral.
Don’t worry about fulfilling dreams
They were made by the failures.
Don’t worry about loyalty
It was made by the insecure.
Don’t cry over broken hearts
They can be mended with Fevicol.

19 comments:

  1. I can see a lot of depth in this!!
    Guess am just reading too much into it .

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  2. munkeshwar!

    very nice poem! especially the bit about fevicol! (i only wish it were that easy)

    and i am glad nonsense munky is back. she is much more fun. :) :P

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  3. Why do I feel like I don't tell you I love you enough? :P
    <3
    I'm not worried, and my heart's not broken. I promise to ask you for fevicol if it ever happens.

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  4. :-). Lovely. I can't say I agree with a lot of the build up (though Nonsensical Munky Googles fixes all of that), but I loved the climax. Hi5

    @Carapace: Munkeshwar is the most awesome of nick names for Munky I've heard yet. If only I had brownies, I'd give 'em to you. Unfortunately, all I have are these non-redeemable brownie points.

    Mokke alert:
    I lol, you lol, we all lol over Fevicol

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  5. Fevicol rulz \m/

    @slinky
    "we all lol over fevicol." brilliant.

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  6. Neat! \m/

    and yeah 'Munkeshwar''s neater! :P

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  7. if its true, then ill need a carton of fevicol :D
    munkeshwar is stud but m still stuck on santi :P

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  8. moral - don't worry be happy

    i guess not...

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  9. clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap


    the poem sounds a little rhetorical
    but very brilliant

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  10. @slinky

    i want brownies!

    @jhopdi
    munkeshwar is MUCH better than santi. The munkeshwar also agrees with me.

    @all

    thank you, thank you.

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  11. @Dadi,
    Does that imply that I am incapable of writing deep stuff?

    @Sooper,
    Munkeshwar? Well, yeah, The Munkeshwar sounds quite cool. \m/
    And thank you. :)

    @Banshee,
    Aww, I'll fix yours with Feviqwik. Okay?

    @Schlunkerboo,
    Lol Lol Lol.

    @Popskee,
    You make me sound like a salesgirl for Fevicol!?!

    @Manchy,
    Thanks. And start using some more adjectives. :P

    @Jhopdi,
    NOOOOOOOO!

    @Bigyo Prakash Dattatreya,
    I did not get your point.

    @Arbit,
    Thanks! *Bows*
    But rhetoric in what sense?

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  12. Profound.
    Or am I reading too much into it?
    :P
    And Mankeshwar is an awesome name.
    Carapace deserves a standing ovation.

    And the Death of the author never happens in your writing, does it?
    :)

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  13. Ammu,
    It is Munkeshwar.
    And am I not capable of writing 'profound' stuff?
    Thanks :)

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  14. Too much dude

    Its like big emo buildup and a nonsensical end
    What does munkeshwar really wanna say.....

    I guess i need to ask The Fooballer poet for fundaes

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  15. @Mikey,
    The point is: Don't be emo. If you are, then you'll cup OR.

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  16. This is known as anticlimax - a device of which I am very fond.

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  17. Does that mean, you liked the post?

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  18. "Don’t worry about the money
    They were stolen by the thieves."

    This sounds wrong.

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  19. Oops, yup. I've made the correction.

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