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Tuesday, 18 March 2008

My Dream

Sat on the wet sand,
Watching the sun
Slowly sink.
Was that my dream?
Sinking into the depths
Of cynicism and self-doubt.

Looked up at the sky,
Watching the moon
Slowly rise.
Was that my dream?
Borrowing the glories
Of the valiant and great.

Gazed at the stars,
Bejewelling the sky
With their twinkle.
Was that my dream?
Shining brightly only when
There was darkness around.

Stared at the water,
Reflecting my face
In the moonlight.
It was a confused me,
Woken up from
My dream...

11 comments:

  1. You being confused - not a dream its reality!!!!

    Wuw
    Muuuahz

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  2. really enjoyed reading it.The boundary between dream and reality is too porous,right?

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  3. "Borrowing the glories
    Of the valiant and great."
    Yay! I got the reference. Lovely shtuff. And hi-five for making scientific references.

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  4. Nice concept. Maybe you could've written it better.

    Lobry de Bruyn van Ekenstein

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  5. wow. super cool! hehe, nice poem.

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